Please tell me how is it! Planning to work as a freelancer game reviewer (maybe for PC Gamer Malaysia ) if my review is okay! Or maybe ARP! I will try to add in some pictures with captions later! Btw... First attempt... So please don't flame me if you find anything wrong with the review... EDIT: Added a couple of screenshots from the official site... And added my own captions to it
It is a rather good review. But : 1) The lack of precision is in fact part of the game. You probably noticed enemies also missed often. Remember, you're a plumber in this game, not a super trained SEAL 2) The review is quite detailed regarding the game. Maybe even a bit too much. Yet you forgot to mention the fun TV coverage, and you say nothing about the makers of the game. 3) You forgot a 1st paragraph in your article. You start right with the story. Thats a no no You gotta "introduce" your subject. Other than that, it's fairly good. I only mention those points as you say you wanna do that as semi-pro. If ya need any help/advice, tell me, maybe I know, as I studied journalism (even wrote some papers and did some radio, only a little bit but heh).
heiiii......nice review.......why dun u ask rojakpot post in rojakpot site?????.......mebbe u can become rojakpot game reviewer?????
Hi Galadorn. This was my first review. Check out my later reviews and tell me if I've improvised These days I don't really have time to write reviews cause there's a project on my hands that's reaching the dateline... Burning midnight oil now Anyway, since you have a review site... Maybe you can post some of my reviews there as well
Well, I won't consider this a new game, but if you like arcade-style games, this is definitely a good buy Btw, wut happened to the 2nd screenshot?