My First Attempt At Game Review: Freedom Fighters

Discussion in 'Games' started by lung, Dec 5, 2003.

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  1. lung

    lung Just Started

    Please tell me how is it! Planning to work as a freelancer game reviewer (maybe for PC Gamer Malaysia :)) if my review is okay! :mrgreen:
    Or maybe ARP! :lol:

    I will try to add in some pictures with captions later! :)

    Btw... First attempt... So please don't flame me if you find anything wrong with the review... :shifty:

    EDIT: Added a couple of screenshots from the official site... And added my own captions to it :lol:
     

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  2. lung

    lung Just Started

    Wow... No reply? Is my review so bad that no one dare to post a comment... :lol:
     
  3. Dashken

    Dashken Administrator!

    It is fine. But on some part, too detail. :thumb: Congrats lung! :clap: :clap: :clap:
     
  4. Falcone

    Falcone Official Mascot Creator

    Good start, keep it up :thumb:

    Yup maybe too much detail....got a bit monotonous along the way.
     
  5. Galadorn

    Galadorn Newbie

    It is a rather good review. But :
    1) The lack of precision is in fact part of the game. You probably noticed enemies also missed often. Remember, you're a plumber in this game, not a super trained SEAL :lol:
    2) The review is quite detailed regarding the game. Maybe even a bit too much. Yet you forgot to mention the fun TV coverage, and you say nothing about the makers of the game.
    3) You forgot a 1st paragraph in your article. You start right with the story. Thats a no no :naughty: You gotta "introduce" your subject.

    Other than that, it's fairly good. I only mention those points as you say you wanna do that as semi-pro. If ya need any help/advice, tell me, maybe I know, as I studied journalism (even wrote some papers and did some radio, only a little bit but heh).
     
  6. TungstenBoy

    TungstenBoy Newbie

    heiiii......nice review.......why dun u ask rojakpot post in rojakpot site?????.......mebbe u can become rojakpot game reviewer????? :thumb: :thumb: :thumb: :thumb:
     
  7. lung

    lung Just Started

    Hi Galadorn. This was my first review. Check out my later reviews and tell me if I've improvised :lol:

    These days I don't really have time to write reviews cause there's a project on my hands that's reaching the dateline... Burning midnight oil now :cry:

    Anyway, since you have a review site... Maybe you can post some of my reviews there as well :)
     
  8. maybe some humor? nice review, im looking to get a new game.... should it be this??
     
  9. lung

    lung Just Started

    Well, I won't consider this a new game, but if you like arcade-style games, this is definitely a good buy :thumb:

    Btw, wut happened to the 2nd screenshot? :lol:
     
  10. Dashken

    Dashken Administrator!

    LOL! Weird... :roll:
     
  11. TungstenBoy

    TungstenBoy Newbie

    yaaaaa.........why the 2nd picture become picture of casings??????? :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha:
     

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